Share it with the world never hurt anyone

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Ok, so I'm a new Beta reader, and well, a friend of mine started her story Outsiders related. It's a sister story but I personally think it's properly developed. However, I wanted to share it with you guys so you can help me with any sort of feedback you can up with. And then I can share your points of view with the author and all.

www.fanfiction.net/s/6198950/1/Fragile_Tough_Girl

Thanks, guys.