It has promise

[Nittanylizard]

Thanks for pointing that one out. I did the same thing earlier, saw the summary, was in a hurry, and skimmed right by it. I just breezed through the first chapter, though, and it's quite well written.

Maybe she needs one of those, "story better than summary!" disclaimers.

Kidding! I'm just kidding! ;D

[fairlane]

Her writing is good and she seems pretty open to suggestions on improvement. I never would have even looked at it. Actually I don't read anything if it's not by a writer I've already read and liked anymore. I know I probably miss some good stuff, I should go back to trawling through to find it like I used to.